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When I do workshops on revision, I often share an example from a draft and a revision to illustrate how I work. At the request of teachers, I have created pdf pages that you can download and print (or project onto your classroom screen) to share with students.

Example of Editing and Revising The Naked Mole-Rat Letters

Example of Revising from Invisible Lines

Example of Editing and Revising Snarf Attack, Underfoodle, and the Secret of Life

Example of Editing and Revising Edgar Allan’s Official Crime Investigation Notebook

Listen to Mary Amato sing one of the songs from her Riot Brother series and talk about how she writes her Riot Brother books.Take the Mummy and Run: The Riot Brothers Are On a Roll

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Teachers and librarians, if your school blocks youtube you can view this on teachertube.

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Bookmarks for you to download. Print on cardstock, cut, and share.

Please Write in This Book bookmark

The Naked Mole-Rat Letters bookmark

When it comes to writing, some kids have a hard time getting started. In this article (first published in the Arizona Reading Association Journal), you can read my suggestions.

Helping Young Writers at the Start

In Invisible Lines, Trevor Musgrove makes a spore print. If you’d like to try it, read on.

Mushrooms release spores, which are tiny, round, reproductive bodies, which you can literally “capture” in a print. Take a mushroom and gently remove the stem—you don’t want to damage the mushroom, but you do want to make sure the thin veil of flesh covering the gills is open so that the gills are exposed. Put the mushroom gill-side down on a piece of paper and cover with a glass. Wait 24 hours, lift off the glass, and carefully pick up the mushroom. You should see the spores released in a pattern.

Spore Print from MAW Fair

Spore Print from MAW Fair

If the spores are white, you won’t see them on white paper and should try placing a new mushroom on a piece of black paper. Some people make spore prints on half black/half white paper to cover either possibility.

Grocery store mushrooms do not work well because they aren’t fresh. Your best bet is to pick a mushroom in the wild, one in which the veil has already begun to open or has opened. You should wash your hands after handling the mushroom, but don’t worry about toxicity exposure…mushrooms that are poisonous to eat are okay to handle with appropriate caution.

If you want to keep your print, make sure to spray it with fixative.

Some people are allergic to mushroom spores, so be appropriately cautious and don’t sniff the spores. –Mary Amato

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Hidden Superfood: Some people believe that mushrooms have little nutritional value. Wrong. Mushrooms are good for you. They contain protein, fiber, essential amino acids, thiamine, riboflavin, niacin, biotin, ascorbic acid and Vitamin D. Mushrooms produce strong antioxidants, antibiotics, and antiviral compounds. Scientists are studying their medicinal compounds to cure cancers and small pox, to treat diabetes, obesity, immune disorders and more. See Mycelium Running: How Mushrooms Can Help Save the World by Paul Stamets.
Cook Before Eating: Make sure you thoroughly cook your mushrooms. White button mushrooms are commonly eaten raw in salads, but many mushrooms will cause digestive problems if eaten raw.
Mushroom Hunting:
Once you start looking for mushrooms, you will start to see them growing on trees, near trees, under leaves, near creeks, in median strips, on your front lawn, and even in the big city.  Different mushrooms pop up at different times of the year. Especially after a good soak. Poisonous species can look remarkably similar to edible types, so don’t eat anything unless you are foraging with a mycologist. Join your local mycological association toHidden Superfood: Some people believe that mushrooms have little nutritional value. Wrong. Mushrooms are good for you. They contain protein, fiber, essential amino acids, thiamine, riboflavin, niacin, biotin, ascorbic acid and Vitamin D. Mushrooms produce strong antioxidants, antibiotics, and antiviral compounds. Scientists are studying their medicinal compounds to cure cancers and small pox, to treat diabetes, obesity, immune disorders and more. See Mycelium Running: How Mushrooms Can Help Save the World by Paul Stamets.
Cook Before Eating: Make sure you thoroughly cook your mushrooms. White button mushrooms are commonly eaten raw in salads, but many mushrooms will cause digestive problems if eaten raw.
Mushroom Hunting:
Once you start looking for mushrooms, you will start to see them growing on trees, near trees, under leaves, near creeks, in median strips, on your front lawn, and even in the big city.  Different mushrooms pop up at different times of the year. Especially after a good soak. Poisonous species can look remarkably similar to edible types, so don’t eat anything unless you are foraging with a mycologist. Join your local mycological association to find experts who can teach you how to identify mushrooms.
find experts who can teach you how to identify mushrooms.

In my book, Invisible Lines, Trevor’s science class goes outside for a mushroom “foray.” Looking for mushrooms is kind of like going on a natural treasure hunt. You don’t have to be in the wild. Mushrooms grow everywhere, even in New York City!

 

Photo by Jim Kuhn

Photo by Jim Kuhn

Mushroom Hunting:

Once you start looking for mushrooms, you will start to see them growing on trees, near trees, under leaves, near creeks, in median strips, on your front lawn, etc.  Different mushrooms pop up at different times of the year. Especially after a good soak.

Photo by Ivan Amato

Photo by Ivan Amato

Looking over some mushroom identification guidebooks can be a great way to familiarize yourself with what might be out there.

Poisonous species can look remarkably similar to edible types, so don’t eat anything unless you are foraging with a mycologist. Join your local mycological association to find experts who can teach you how to identify mushrooms.–Mary Amato

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Kids at Barrington Elementary School in Ohio acted out scenes from the Riot Brother books and posted them as a slide-show on their school website. What a great way to encourage reading, improvisation, and playwriting! Students can improvise or write short plays, based on scenes from their favorite books, and act them out.

A Riot Brother rule: If you draw a mustache, do not use permanent ink!

A Riot Brother rule: If you draw a mustache, do not use permanent ink!

According to Wilbur Riot, there is nothing quite so frightening as your mom chasing after you with kissy lips!

According to Wilbur Riot, there is nothing quite so frightening as your mom chasing after you with kissy lips!

Can you flare your nostrils and raise one eyebrow? These are essential Riot Brother skills.

Can you flare your nostrils and raise one eyebrow? These are essential Riot Brother skills.

The Riot Brothers' Secret of life is to make something exciting happen everyday.

The Riot Brothers' Secret of life is to make something exciting happen everyday.

Wilbur and Orville Riot give annoying lessons at school to earn money! Do NOT try this at your school!

Wilbur and Orville Riot give annoying lessons at school to earn money! Do NOT try this at your school!

If you laugh while your brother is drinking milk, and milk comes out his nose, that is a Snarf Attack!

If you laugh while your brother is drinking milk, and milk comes out his nose, that is a Snarf Attack!

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